Poem Los amorosos by Jaime Sabines and its Analysis
The poem The loving ones by Jaime Sabines was published in 1949 in his first collection of poems entitled Hours. This poem has been one of the most recognized and cited writings of the author.
The lovers are silent.
Love is the finest silence,
The most trembling, the most unbearable.
The loving ones seek,
the loving ones are the ones who abandon,
They are the ones who change, the ones who forget.Your heart tells you that you will never find,
they do not find, they seek.
The lovers go crazy
because they are alone, alone, alone,
giving himself up, giving himself all the time,
crying because they don't save love.They care about love. The loving ones
they live from day to day, they can't do more, they don't know.
They are always leaving
always, somewhere.
Are waiting,
they don't expect anything, but they wait.They know that they will never find.
Love is the perpetual extension,
always the next step, the other, the other.
The loving are the insatiable,
those who always - good! - have to be alone.
The lovers are the hydra of the story.They have snakes instead of arms.
Neck veins swell
also like snakes to suffocate them.
Lovers can't sleep
because if they sleep they are eaten by worms.
In the dark they open their eyes
and dread falls on them.
They find scorpions under the sheet
and his bed floats as on a lake.Lovers are crazy, just crazy
without God and without devil.
The lovers come out of their caves
trembling, hungry,
to hunt ghosts.
They laugh at the people who know everything,
of those who love in perpetuity, truly,
of those who believe in love
like a lamp of inexhaustible oil.The lovers play to catch the water,
to tattoo the smoke, not to leave.
They play the long, sad game of love.
No one has to resign.
They say that nobody has to resign.
The lovers are ashamed of all conformation.
Empty, but empty from one rib to another,
death ferments behind their eyes,
and they walk, cry until dawn
in which trains and roosters say goodbye painfully.Sometimes a smell of newborn earth comes to them,
to women who sleep with their hands in sex,
pleased,
to streams of tender water and to kitchens.
The lovers begin to sing between their lips
a song not learned,
and they go crying, crying,
the beautiful life.
It is one of the best known and most recited poems and, even, that in various films, advertising campaigns and songs verses of it have been cited.
Los amorosos is a poem that should be read silently and slowly. It evokes a coming and going of a universal feeling, love, that all human beings feel but that many times we do not know where to look, to whom to give or how to live.
Analysis of The loving ones
Poetry is a literary and artistic expression through which poets and other writers express infinity of feelings and reconfigure hundreds of scenarios and experiences lived throughout their lives.
The poems can, then, deal with various themes and reflections. In this case, Sabines wrote a poem whose main object or theme is love and many of the many things that this feeling entails that are carried out by people.
The loving ones it has a poetic composition of eight stanzas, free rhyme. The first four stanzas contain six verses, stanzas number five and six have nine verses, the seventh stanza has ten verses and the eighth eight verses.
Perhaps this particularity derives from the way in which the poem arose, which, according to the author himself, was written in a moment of inspiration and this was the result.
The lovers are silent.
Love is the finest silence,
The most trembling, the most unbearable.
The loving ones seek,
the loving ones are the ones who abandon,
They are the ones who change, the ones who forget
Your heart tells you that you will never find,
they do not find, they seek.
However, although the rhyme throughout the poem is free, you can find verses that contain an inner rhyme, such as:
giving himself, giving himself all the time ...
to tattoo the smoke, not to leave ...
and they go crying, crying ...
The loving ones It is a poem that transmits joy and pain between its verses. Sabines is dedicated to exposing what a being feels in the search for love, how he lives it and how he interprets it.
At the beginning of the poem, the subject seems to be the voice of the author himself, but, as he advances in the reading, changes and highlights the voice of the lovers, of those men who are in search of love perfect.
On The loving ones individuals are in a constant search, but not yet finding what they really want, perhaps because they are not capable of giving the same as receive or because even if they get their soul mate, still, the feeling of love is so strong that it makes it unbearable and difficult to endure.
All people are in search of giving love and being loved, consequently, they are constantly working on it regardless of whether they achieve it or not. However, in The loving ones, the poet seems to make it clear that love will not be found or, at least, as the lovers are looking for it.
To further embellish the poem, Sabines relies on the use of various literary figures in order to enrich the text and express the pain or sadness that the lovers feel when they cannot find what they long for.
Therefore, throughout the verses, different literary figures such as metaphor, comparison, oxymoron, among others, can be identified.
Metaphor:
The lovers play to catch the water,
to tattoo the smoke, not to leave ...
Anaphora:
They laugh at the people who know everything,
of those who love in perpetuity, truly,
of those who believe in love as in an inexhaustible oil lamp ...
Comparison:
The lovers go like crazy ...
Hyperbole:
Empty, but empty from one rib to another,
death ferments behind their eyes, ...
The use of literary figures is a strategy that enriches the verses and involves more readers in the rhythm of reading the poem.
Sabines, in his poem The loving ones, he knew how to play in each verse with the order of the words so that the reader could not only read but also could imagine and feel how a Casanova lover lives according to love.
Jaime Sabines was a Mexican poet and politician. He was born on March 25, 1926 and passed away on March 19, 1999, at the age of 72 and after enduring several years of illness. Sabines is recognized as one of the most important Mexican poets of the 20th century.
His literary work is highly appreciated and recognized by important authors and poets such as Octavio Paz, who recognizes him as one of the best poets of his time and of his language.
Sabines, in addition to being a poet, also became involved in the area of politics and came to serve as a deputy for some years, without neglecting his literary creation.